Simple production with a high degree of lack of focus: it was about information NOT opinion. It was alright to introduce some opinion genre within the 8 minutes, but dedicating most of the time to give opinion and leave a few minutes for 3 news stories (¡) is absolutely unbalanced. Not appropriate to comply with the exercise. I suggest you repeat it. Production is therefore poor. The selection of news is fine and delivery is acceptable (though much more rehearsal is needed to improve reading; speed is generally good). Writing seems to be fine but should reconsider punctuation; the way in which some of you read makes me think some paragraphs could have been improved. The news stories are followed by an exchanged between 3 which is never introduced or explained (and in the same way it appears, it just disappears… ??) In a few words: there are no opening/ending/transitions … Mixing is good though minor.
Repetition: Simple but good production: good (though unattractive) way of presenting and linking the stories chosen. The selection of news is fine and delivery is acceptable (speed is generally good). The ending is coherent with the opening. Mixing is pretty basic: relevant clip, well placed; although the whole thing could have been improved using bed(s) all along: rhythm is too monotonous at a certain point. G
Simple production with a high degree of lack of focus: it was about information NOT opinion. It was alright to introduce some opinion genre within the 8 minutes, but dedicating most of the time to give opinion and leave a few minutes for 3 news stories (¡) is absolutely unbalanced. Not appropriate to comply with the exercise. I suggest you repeat it.
ReplyDeleteProduction is therefore poor. The selection of news is fine and delivery is acceptable (though much more rehearsal is needed to improve reading; speed is generally good). Writing seems to be fine but should reconsider punctuation; the way in which some of you read makes me think some paragraphs could have been improved. The news stories are followed by an exchanged between 3 which is never introduced or explained (and in the same way it appears, it just disappears… ??)
In a few words: there are no opening/ending/transitions …
Mixing is good though minor.
Repetition:
ReplyDeleteSimple but good production: good (though unattractive) way of presenting and linking the stories chosen. The selection of news is fine and delivery is acceptable (speed is generally good).
The ending is coherent with the opening. Mixing is pretty basic: relevant clip, well placed; although the whole thing could have been improved using bed(s) all along: rhythm is too monotonous at a certain point.
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